考研英语二2011年大作文失分点批改

本文整理了2011年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改例文，是备考考研英语作文真题范文的实用素材。考研英语作文在考研英语中占据重要分值，历年真题范文能够帮助考生快速把握命题规律与评分要点，下面让我们一同走进这篇批改范文。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

As is numerically illustrated in the statistics about the car brands, the percentage of the Chinese brands is increased from 25% to 32% in one year between 2008 and 2009, while the percentage of the Japanese brands is decreased from 35% to 25%. And the American brands are maintaining. From my perspetive, the above figures reveal a currently prevailing tendency among contemporary society.

To examine the root cause of this tendency, certainfactors should be specifically pointed out here. First and foremost, just as Karl Marx once said, the economic basis determines the superstructure: It is precisely the boosting comprehensive national strength of China that constitutes the precondition for the above-mentioned tendency. More people choose to by the cars that are made in China. What"s more, the shift of relevant population"s preferences is one of the contributing dynamics. In addition, social media platforms substantially facilitate the flow andinten sification of certain awareness, thus accelerating the transtion from an emerging phenomenon into the new reality.

In conclusion, the current tendency is of profound inherent rationality and inevitability, and will continue to exist in the foreseeable future. Correspondingly, as the vanguard and successor of our society, we should grasp the pulse of this trend and actively meet whatever challenges and opportunities it may bring about.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：perspetive

批改：perspective

原文：As is numerically illustrated in the statistics about the car brands, the percentage of the Chinese brands is increased from 25% to 32% in one year between 2008 and 2009, while the percentage of the Japanese brands is decreased from 35% to 25%. And the American brands are maintaining. From my perspetive, the above figures reveal a currently prevailing tendency among contemporary society.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：by

批改：buy

原文：population"s

批改：不是人口，是人，改成people"s

原文：To examine the root cause of this tendency, certainfactors should be specifically pointed out here. First and foremost, just as Karl Marx once said, the economic basis determines the superstructure: It is precisely the boosting comprehensive national strength of China that constitutes the precondition for the above-mentioned tendency. More people choose to by the cars that are made in China. What"s more, the shift of relevant population"s preferences is one of the contributing dynamics. In addition, social media platforms substantially facilitate the flow andinten sification of certain awareness, thus accelerating the transtion from an emerging phenomenon into the new reality.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：In conclusion, the current tendency is of profound inherent rationality and inevitability, and will continue to exist in the foreseeable future. Correspondingly, as the vanguard and successor of our society, we should grasp the pulse of this trend and actively meet whatever challenges and opportunities it may bring about.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，要注意正确使用词语；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础较好。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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