2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This bar chart indicates the quantity of urban-rural population changes over the period from 1990 to 2010，unfolding that the urban population in China is gradually increasing,it has increased by more than double, while the rural population is gradually decreasing.

It is a striking morning call to send us a significant message that urbanization has been in the spotlight in current society.Among the topic concerning urbanization，It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences urbanization result in.To begin with,people in rural areas can enjoy better medical and educational conditions, which can lead to a better life for them, Apart from,as more people migrate to cities, the economy of society will also experience faster development.

Considering these general illustrations，we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that China"s economy is developing steadily and rapidly, and people"s lives are getting better and better.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：it

批改：前加and连接两个并列分句

原文：This bar chart indicates the quantity of urban-rural population changes over the period from 1990 to 2010，unfolding that the urban population in China is gradually increasing,it has increased by more than double, while the rural population is gradually decreasing.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：It

批改：逗号后单词小写

原文：,

批改：句号

原文：Apart from

批改：apart from后面必须加宾语使用，不能单独做成分，改成In addition

原文：It is a striking morning call to send us a significant message that urbanization has been in the spotlight in current society.Among the topic concerning urbanization，It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences urbanization result in.To begin with,people in rural areas can enjoy better medical and educational conditions, which can lead to a better life for them, Apart from,as more people migrate to cities, the economy of society will also experience faster development.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：Considering these general illustrations，we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that China"s economy is developing steadily and rapidly, and people"s lives are getting better and better.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，语言很连贯。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，注意apart from短语的用法；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意两个并列分句之间用连词连接；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。要注意以上的细节错误以及逗号后单词小写。

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