2015年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二作文范文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2015年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of a city residents" expenditures in China during the spring Festival.Festival gift takes the lead at 40%. Additionally, factors such as transport,party and other items are also considered, accounting for 20% respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, theimportance of social interaction and family ties is one that should never lose its luster, as it is an essential bond that keeps the chinese nation thriving.During the holiday, holding a party and exchanging gifts can strengthen the solidarity among families and friends.In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society. people"s attitudes towards consumption have undergone significant changes.With the development of the economy, people also change the ways of congratulating the spring Festival.This explains the reasons of the phenomenon.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people,serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of a city residents" expenditures in China during the spring Festival.Festival gift takes the lead at 40%. Additionally, factors such as transport,party and other items are also considered, accounting for 20% respectively.

批改：将图表中的内容描述的完整准确，值得表扬。

原文：chinese

批改：Chinese首字母大写

批改：逗号

原文：spring

批改：Spring

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, theimportance of social interaction and family ties is one that should never lose its luster, as it is an essential bond that keeps the chinese nation thriving.During the holiday, holding a party and exchanging gifts can strengthen the solidarity among families and friends.In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society. people"s attitudes towards consumption have undergone significant changes.With the development of the economy, people also change the ways of congratulating the spring Festival.This explains the reasons of the phenomenon.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people,serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，国家名和节日名是专有名词首字母大写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意正确使用标点断句；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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