考研英语一2013年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2013年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2013年大作文题目

考研英语一2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2013年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are many students standing in front of the crossing road of life and facing a lot of choices, such as finding a job, going out for studying, making a further study as a poststudent and creating own job. Evidently the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is proper choice which is suitable for yourself that plays an important role in personal development.

The phenomenon is thought- provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, choosing the road that is suitable for yourself can ignite your potential, promote individual development, thus making life meaningful and rewarding, rather than self consuming. On the other hand, if you choose the way which you don"t like, is not only merely like chronic poison that stifles your potential , but also the Achilles" hill for many youth.It silently erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of acent into a self-destructive slide.

in brief, to choose the road you like is the catalyst for personal development. We should actively advocate this practice, thus making students find their wonderful road. Only by doing this students can achieve their dreams and our society can shine brightly.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：poststudent

批改：postgraduate研究生

原文：creating own job

批改：starting a business创业

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are many students standing in front of the crossing road of life and facing a lot of choices, such as finding a job, going out for studying, making a further study as a poststudent and creating own job. Evidently the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is proper choice which is suitable for yourself that plays an important role in personal development.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

批改：加连字符

原文：if you choose the way which you don"t like, is not only merely like chronic poison that stifles your potential

批改：前半句 “if you choose the way which you don"t like” 是条件状语从句，后半句 “is not only merely like...” 缺少主语，增加it

原文：hill

批改：heel

原文：youth

批改：复数youths

原文：acent

批改：ascent

原文：nomenon is thought- provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, choosing the road that is suitable for yourself can ignite your potential, promote individual development, thus making life meaningful and rewarding, rather than self consuming. On the other hand, if you choose the way which you don"t like, is not only merely like chronic poison that stifles your potential , but also the Achilles" hill for many youth.It silently erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of acent into a self-destructive slide.

批改：能够通过正反两方面进行论述来突出论点，能够运用逻辑关系词，使得句子之间衔接较为连贯。

原文：in

批改：In

原文：students can

批改：only置于句首，需要到装，改成can students

原文：our society can

批改：到装：can our society

原文：n brief, to choose the road you like is the catalyst for personal development. We should actively advocate this practice, thus making students find their wonderful road. Only by doing this students can achieve their dreams and our society can shine brightly.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面，注意句子结构的完整连贯，不要缺少成分；语法方面，注意倒装句的正确使用。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误会更好。继续加油。

考研英语作文万能句型写作提分高效的方式，是让经验丰富的老师亲自批改你的作文。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，主讲斌哥亲批每一份学员作业，真题作业批改、轻松应对各种复杂题目，让考研英语写作更有底。