2025年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of various leisure activities in daily life among the elderly at a certain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by going for a walk at 68.3%. In addition, factors such as cultivating flowers, reading, and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8%, and 18.4%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound elderly-care system, enabling the elderly to have ample opportunities for diverse activities. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of old people choose to cultivate flowers, read books and play chess. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the elderly, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of various leisure activities in daily life among the elderly at a certain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by going for a walk at 68.3%. In addition, factors such as cultivating flowers, reading, and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8%, and 18.4%, respectively.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

批改：加development

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound elderly-care system, enabling the elderly to have ample opportunities for diverse activities. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of old people choose to cultivate flowers, read books and play chess. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the elderly, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

论述的内容全面，逻辑结构清晰，字数符合作文的要求，值得表扬，希望能够注意以下的小问题。

词汇方面：无拼写错误，值得表扬。

语法方面：语法基础较好，但是要注意成分完整。

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