2014年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2014年考研英语二大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文万能句型的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the population changes of urban and rural from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the population of urban was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially increased to 666 million. In contrast, the population of rural experienced a significant decrease of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the phenomenon observed can be summarized as follows. To begain with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment environment and transportation system, enabling rural people to have ample opportunities for living in urban. In additional, in wake of the high-speed development of society, more and more rural people are no longer content with mere rural life, they also pursue urban life which have more development opportunities. This explains why an increasing number of rural people prefer to live in urban. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about the future trends? I am confident that the population of urban will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：加areas

原文：urban

批改：后加areas

原文：rural

批改：后加areas

原文：he bar chart clearly depicts the population changes of urban and rural from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the population of urban was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially increased to 666 million. In contrast, the population of rural experienced a significant decrease of 160 million during the same period.

批改：将图表中的内容描述的完整准确，值得表扬。

原文：urban

批改：加areas

原文：additional

批改：addition

批改：加the

原文：,

批改：分号

原文：life

批改：复数lives

原文：urban

批改：加areas

原文：he core reasons for the phenomenon observed can be summarized as follows. To begain with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment environment and transportation system, enabling rural people to have ample opportunities for living in urban. In additional, in wake of the high-speed development of society, more and more rural people are no longer content with mere rural life, they also pursue urban life which have more development opportunities. This explains why an increasing number of rural people prefer to live in urban. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：urban

批改：加areas

原文：What about the future trends? I am confident that the population of urban will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，要注意区分单词词性；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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