2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2014年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the changes in urban and rural populations in China within twenty years. In 1990, the urban population was 300 millions and the rural was 834 millions. There was a hug disparity in population between the two places. In 2000, the urban population was 458 millions and the rural was 807 millions. But in 2010,the urban population was 666 millions and the rural was 674 millions. The population gap between the two places has narrowed rapidly, and they were almost on a per.

The reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes ,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound social system, drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to live in the urban. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to finding job in big cities and have become the primary group.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase and the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：millions

批改：数字+million，用单数，不需要加s

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：hug

批改：huge

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

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原文：millions

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原文：on a per

批改：表达不正确

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the changes in urban and rural populations in China within twenty years. In 1990, the urban population was 300 millions and the rural was 834 millions. There was a hug disparity in population between the two places. In 2000, the urban population was 458 millions and the rural was 807 millions. But in 2010,the urban population was 666 millions and the rural was 674 millions. The population gap between the two places has narrowed rapidly, and they were almost on a per.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：The reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes ,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound social system, drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to live in the urban. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to finding job in big cities and have become the primary group.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase and the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意数字+hundred/thousand/million，用单数。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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