2013年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二写作技巧每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2013年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly display the percentage of breakdown of the situation of wark part-time that college students.Graduating students work part-time takes the lead at 88.24%, followed by the second and third year of college students work part-time at 71.13% and 71.93%. Additionally, freshman work part-time only at 67.77%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, work exprience is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. In addition, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason is this phenomenon is university students are compelled to confront immense job pressure, and as result, work part-time has emerged as their significant choice for atilizing leisure time. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students, serving as a microcosm of the changee in ear, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： display

批改： 改为 displays

原文： percentage of breakdown of the situation of wark part-time that college students.

批改：语意繁琐且不地道，改为 the changes in part-time job situations among college students at a certain university.

原文：work

批改：一个句子不能出现两个谓语动词，改为 working

原文： work

批改：working

原文：freshman

批改：复数名词，改为 freshmen

原文：modern society

批改：In modern society

原文：is

批改：for

原文：c

批改：大写

原文：as result,

批改：as a result

原文：work

批改：working

原文：atilizing

批改： utilizing

原文：changee

批改：changes

原文：w

批改：大写

原文： ear

批改：era

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8 /15

从结构层面看，本文脉络清晰，采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，第二段的分析很好，内容详实，丰富具体；

从语言层面看，单词拼写和语法细节错误太多，影响评分；主语 是单数，谓语动词要用单三，可数名词要变复数。

建议：检查单词拼写，分析是否缺少句子成分，多积累短语的固定用法。尽量用自己的语言。

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