2014年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

备战2014年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语二写作高分规划。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart depicts the population of town and rural in 20 years. In 1990, the number of town population was 30 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 660 million. In contrast, the number of rural populations experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of society, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound urbanization system, enabling rural people to live an urban life. In addition, in the wake of high-speed advancement of society, the countryside younger generation, particularly to pursuing jobs in cities and have become the primary urban mass. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of town population will steadily increasing in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural populations will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：town

批改：城镇人口的标准表达要用urban

原文：in

批改：20年期间介词要用over

原文：town

批改：同前文，urban

原文：30

批改：图表中是300

原文：populations

批改：population本身是集合名词，应去掉s

原文：The bar chart depicts the population of town and rural in 20 years. In 1990, the number of town population was 30 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 660 million. In contrast, the number of rural populations experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：对图表的描述较为详细，但要注意关键数据的准确性

原文：summarized

批改：要用被动语态，前面加上be

原文：countryside younger generation

批改：表达有误，可改为younger generation in rural areas

原文： to pursuing

批改：缺少代词代指前文的乡村年轻人，应改为those pursuing

原文：chart

批改：前面要加定冠词the

原文：increasing

批改：will后接动词原形increase

原文：stable

批改：修饰decrease要用副词stably

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of society, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound urbanization system, enabling rural people to live an urban life. In addition, in the wake of high-speed advancement of society, the countryside younger generation, particularly to pursuing jobs in cities and have become the primary urban mass. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in chart is unsurprising.

批改：从政策和年轻人求职意向角度分析人口变化的原因，注意语法问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of town population will steadily increasing in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural populations will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

批改：表达个人观点，注意个别语法问题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7/15

题目要求：描绘图表时关键数据有错误，需要注意下，个人观点及论述内容符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了一些经典句式，但语法错误较多，表达效果有待提高；如果目前还不能准确使用例句，也可以尝试用自己的语言表达，先锻炼下语法水平；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段给出详细分析，第三段表达 个人观点，架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；继续多多积累经典句式；加强语法练习；

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