考研英语二2011年大作文怎么写？附例文批改

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一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicts the changes of a part of brands market of our Chinese car market in 2008 and 2009.In 2008, the percentage of Chinese cars was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 33%. in contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformo In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s car manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brands is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：line chart

批改：bar chart 柱状图

原文：market

批改：多余，删去

原文：The line chart clearly depicts the changes of a part of brands market of our Chinese car market in 2008 and 2009.In 2008, the percentage of Chinese cars was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 33%. in contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：transformo

批改：transformation，后加句号

原文：To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformo In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s car manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brands is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American brands will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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