考研英语二2011年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2011年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二作文模板教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was 25%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China’s automotive industry is responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trend? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign cars will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was 25%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

批改：描述了图表内容，符合题目要求

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China’s automotive industry is responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：提出了产生这种现象的原因，条理清晰

原文：What about future trend? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign cars will likely continue to decrease.

批改：结尾段内容结构完整

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10

文章符合题目要求，描写图表数据，提出了相应的观点，三段式的结构也符合此类文章的大体结构。但是，希望平时练习的作文能够自己动笔写，只有平时动笔练习了，考试的时候才不至于无话可说。希望继续努力，加油！

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