考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the marketing proportion of some brands in car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brand was approximately 26%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a significant decline of about 9% during the same time. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards consumption have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose domestic brand rather than foreign brand. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of Chinese people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： domestic brand

批改：国内品牌有很多种，这里用复数

原文：Japanese brand

批改：同样用复数

原文：American brand

批改：复数

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the marketing proportion of some brands in car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brand was approximately 26%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a significant decline of about 9% during the same time. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

批改：描述图表内容，符合题目要求

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards consumption have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose domestic brand rather than foreign brand. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：提出了相关的观点，逻辑清晰

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of Chinese people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：对未来情况表示预测，符合结尾段落的内容要求

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10

文章符合题目要求，逻辑清晰，语法问题较少，需要注意单复数的用法。另外，希望平时练习的时候可以自己动笔写，模板中的句子可以参考背诵，只有平时自己练习写作了，考试的时候才不会无话可说，希望继续努力，加油！

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