考研英语一2017年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语一真题每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2017年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

The two pictures vividly illustrate the difference between “owning books” and “reading books”. In the left picture, a person is lying leisurely among shelves of books, exclaiming, “I have so many books!” In the right picture, another person is sitting at a desk, focusing on reading, with a goal: “I resolve to finish reading 20 books this year.”

These pictures intend to convey a thought-provoking message: possessing books doesn’t equal reading them. In today’s world, many people take pride in collecting books as a symbol of knowledge, yet fail to actually engage with the content. True reading requires dedication and action, not just the ownership of physical books.

From my perspective, we should prioritize reading over merely accumulating books. Reading enriches our minds and broadens our horizons, while unread books are just decorations. To make the most of books, we need to set reading goals, develop a consistent reading habit, and reflect on what we’ve read. Only in this way can we truly benefit from the wisdom contained in books.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The two pictures vividly illustrate the difference between “owning books” and “reading books”. In the left picture, a person is lying leisurely among shelves of books, exclaiming, “I have so many books!” In the right picture, another person is sitting at a desk, focusing on reading, with a goal: “I resolve to finish reading 20 books this year.”

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

原文：These pictures intend to convey a thought-provoking message: possessing books doesn’t equal reading them. In today’s world, many people take pride in collecting books as a symbol of knowledge, yet fail to actually engage with the content. True reading requires dedication and action, not just the ownership of physical books.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。

原文：From my perspective, we should prioritize reading over merely accumulating books. Reading enriches our minds and broadens our horizons, while unread books are just decorations. To make the most of books, we need to set reading goals, develop a consistent reading habit, and reflect on what we’ve read. Only in this way can we truly benefit from the wisdom contained in books.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础很好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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