2021年考研英语一大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2021年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2021年考研英语一大作文题目

考研英语一2021年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should1)describe the picture briefly, 2)interpret the implied meaning, and 3)give your comments. Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、2021年考研英语一大作文批改例文

As shown in the picture, there a child is saying: "Dad, many classmates think learning opera is boring." And the father said " Are you like it? it is sufficiently.Evidently, The picture intends to convey to readers that it is persist in what you love that plays an important and positive role both in our persond lives and in society.

This phenomenon is though-provoking in several ways, but three of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, opera is our Chinese truditional culture, it is an essential bond that keeps the Chinese nation thriving. For the more, persist in what you love can nature our souls, and promotepersonal growth and self-fulfill ment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful. Lastly, In modern society full of changes, chances and challeng,perseverance has become a key quality that distinguished exceptional individuals from ordinary people and its sigaific has become increasingly evident.

In brief, opera is the catalyst for societal and personal development. from which we all stand to benefit Therefore, we should actively promote and carry forward traditional culture. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： there

批改：删去，a child 直接作主语

原文：said

批改：改为一般现在时即可 says

原文： Are

批改：be 动词不能和动画原形连用，改为 Do

原文：sufficiently

批改：此处为形容词，改为 sufficient

批改：父亲说的话在此处表达的不是很清晰，可直接改为 And his father encourages the child to stick to his hobby

原文：The

批改：the

原文：persond

批改：personal

原文：persist

批改：此处为强调句，强调的是主语，动词原形不能作主语，改为persisting

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

原文：it

批改：两个完整的句子之间需要加连接词，改为 and it

原文：distinguished

批改：改为一般现在时即可 distinguishes

原文：sigaific

批改：此处为名词，改为 significance

原文：For the more

批改：Furthermore

原文：persist

批改：动词原形不能作主语，改为persisting

批改：此处的分析都要围绕 坚持喜欢的事物 展开，不用分析传统戏剧

批改：内容表达不错，也比较具体

批改：此处为逗号

原文： benefit

批改：加句号

原文：renewed

批改：此处为名词，改为 renewed brilliance

批改：要注意文章的主题词，这篇图画表达的不是戏曲多重要，而是要 坚持喜欢的事物，全篇都要围绕其展开

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合，但是要注意主题词是什么，接下来整篇文章都要围绕主题词来写

语言表达：存在一些语法和拼写错误，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法和内容表达问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的表达，加油！

考研英语作文万能句型写作提分高效的方式，是让经验丰富的老师亲自批改你的作文。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，主讲斌哥亲批每一份学员作业，真题作业批改、轻松应对各种复杂题目，让考研英语写作更有底。