2025年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

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一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

请在各题目的答题区域内作答,超出答题区的答案无效 Section IV Writing Part B

48. The har chart clearly depicts the major choice of older people to spend their leisure time in a certain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.80%, followed by walking around. Keeping flowers, reading and playing chase are also considered, accounting for 34.70%, 31.80% and 18.40% respectively.

and

individuals

have started

attention to health,

that"s why many old people

choose to take a walk

when they have nothing to do. Considering these factors,

the Phenomenon displayyed in the bar chart is unsurpring.

What about future trends? I"m confident that

watching TV and taking a walk will be the major choice

of old people in the following decades.

请在各题目的答题区域内作答,超出答题区的答案无效。

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：har

批改：bar

原文：chase

批改：chess

原文：The har chart clearly depicts the major choice of older people to spend their leisure time in a certain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.80%, followed by walking around. Keeping flowers, reading and playing chase are also considered, accounting for 34.70%, 31.80% and 18.40% respectively.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：displayyed

批改：displayed

原文：unsurpring

批改：unsurprising

原文：and individuals have started attention to health,

批改：内容不全面。

原文：that"s why many old people choose to take a walk when they have nothing to do. Considering these factors, the Phenomenon displayyed in the bar chart is unsurpring. What about future trends? I"m confident that watching TV and taking a walk will be the major choice of old people in the following decades.

批改：论述内容较少，字数不够

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础还不错。

3）修改建议：字数不足，未达到作文的要求，论述内容需要增加。再接再厉。

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