2019年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

2019年考研英语二大作文是考研英语作文模板备考清单中的必练题型。本文带来的高分批改范例，配套启航教育老师的逐句批注与预测话题标签，适合考研英语考生在冲刺阶段精读精练，是一套完整的写作提升资料。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

必须使用黑色字迹书写:在答题卡区域内作答,超出黑色矩形边框限定区域的答案无效!

2019年考研英语二大作文 (某高校2013年和2018年本科毕业生去向统计).

Reflected in the column chart above are the charges in the destinations of graduates in a certain college from 2013 to 2018. From the chart above, it can be seen that during this period, employment reduced greatly from

68.1% to 60.7%, while on the other hand, furthering education jumped rapidly from 26.3% to 34% between 2013 and 2018.

Besides, the percentage of starting a business rocketed to the top of 2.6%

Even though quite complex factors contributed to this trend, under no

circumstances can we deny that the major reasons can be identified as follows. In the first place, as China"s economy has experienced significant growth in recent years and the living standards of its citizens have improved, an increasing number of People are focusing on the size of the job market. Furthermore, as society progresses, People"s perceptions of the choice between further education and employment are undergoing transformation, resulting in a growing preference for it among the mass.

Due to the presence of various influencing factors, including those previously mentioned, we cannot dismiss the reality of this trend and its potential for continued development. It is high time that the government should actively implement concrete measures relating to optimizing employment policies and environment to ensure continued effects so that we can look forward to a more promising future.

必须使用黑色字迹书写:在答题卡区域内作答,超出黑色矩形边框限定区域的答案无效!

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：charges

批改：“changes”

原文：P

批改：小写

原文：should

批改：“It is high time that” 后接虚拟语气，应省略 “should”

原文：Reflected in the column chart above are the charges in the destinations of graduates in a certain college from 2013 to 2018. From the chart above, it can be seen that during this period, employment reduced greatly from 68.1% to 60.7%, while on the other hand, furthering education jumped rapidly from 26.3% to 34% between 2013 and 2018. Besides, the percentage of starting a business rocketed to the top of 2.6

批改：描述图表内容，符合题目要求

原文：Even though quite complex factors contributed to this trend, under no circumstances can we deny that the major reasons can be identified as follows. In the first place, as China"s economy has experienced significant growth in recent years and the living standards of its citizens have improved, an increasing number of People are focusing on the size of the job market. Furthermore, as society progresses, People"s perceptions of the choice between further education and employment are undergoing transformation, resulting in a growing preference for it among the mass.

批改：提出了自己的观点，使用了表示逻辑关系的连接词，条理较为清晰

原文：Due to the presence of various influencing factors, including those previously mentioned, we cannot dismiss the reality of this trend and its potential for continued development. It is high time that the government should actively implement concrete measures relating to optimizing employment policies and environment to ensure continued effects so that we can look forward to a more promising future.

批改：总结全文，升华主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13

原文框架完整，准确捕捉了 “某高校 2013-2018 届毕业生去向变化” 的核心数据（就业比例下降、深造比例上升、创业比例小幅增长），具备考研英语图表作文基本结构。但存在以下问题：语法 / 拼写错误（如 “charges”“People” 大写），写完可以再整体检查一遍，避免出现粗心导致的问题，希望继续努力，加油！

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