考研英语一2017年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2017年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一写作技巧教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

The interesting picture vividly shows that the man has many books in the left picture, and in the other picture the man is reading books. The picture is an excellent reminder of books and reading books. Considering the significance of reading, it is necessary to point out the far-reaching consequences behind it.

Firstly, reading books. to some extent. inevitably brings enormous benefits to acquiring knowledge. As Edward, director of community service at University of Cambridge. put it, "reading. Under any circumstance, it tends to be of great importance. Moreover, cultivating reading habits exerts a positive influence on our growth and success. A recent Internet questionnaire of the relevant department indicates that about 83.2% of the independents hold the same view.

The above mentioned facts can naturally lead us to the conclusion that great importance should be attached to reading books.

Newspapers and news media should promote publicity of it. Everyone should cultivate a better awareness of it and take practical actions.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：books

批改：前加having

原文：The interesting picture vividly shows that the man has many books in the left picture, and in the other picture the man is reading books. The picture is an excellent reminder of books and reading books. Considering the significance of reading, it is necessary to point out the far-reaching consequences behind it.

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

批改：逗号

批改：逗号

批改：逗号

批改：逗号

原文：Under

批改：逗号后面的单词要小写

原文：it

批改：前面已经有主语reading了，所以把it去掉

原文：irstly, reading books. to some extent. inevitably brings enormous benefits to acquiring knowledge. As Edward, director of community service at University of Cambridge. put it, "reading. Under any circumstance, it tends to be of great importance. Moreover, cultivating reading habits exerts a positive influence on our growth and success. A recent Internet questionnaire of the relevant department indicates that about 83.2% of the independents hold the same view. The above mentioned facts can naturally lead us to the conclusion that great importance should be attached to reading books.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：Newspapers and news media should promote publicity of it. Everyone should cultivate a better awareness of it and take practical actions.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，要注意正确使用标点符号断句；语法方面，要避免句子成分的重复，比如两个谓语。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误会更好。继续加油。

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