考研英语一2017年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a young man, sitting on a chair and saying that he have so many books. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, another boy says to himself, "I will read 20 books in this year.” Evidently, the cartsonist intends to convey to readers that being practical is the brush that paints a bright future, while daydreaming is the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, being practical can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, daydreaming is not only merely a chronic poison that stifles potential, but also Achilles" heel of many youngsters and teenagers. It silenty erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of ascent into a self-distructive slide, ultimately turning one into a devoted follower of the "lying flat" philosophy.

In brief, being practical is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality ;additionally, we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of daydreaming to ensure our growth stays on course.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：have

批改：主谓一致，改成has

原文：In the left-hand cartoon, there is a young man, sitting on a chair and saying that he have so many books. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, another boy says to himself, "I will read 20 books in this year.” Evidently, the cartsonist intends to convey to readers that being practical is the brush that paints a bright future, while daydreaming is the shackle that hinders progress.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, being practical can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, daydreaming is not only merely a chronic poison that stifles potential, but also Achilles" heel of many youngsters and teenagers. It silenty erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of ascent into a self-distructive slide, ultimately turning one into a devoted follower of the "lying flat" philosophy.

批改：能够通过正反两方面进行论述来突出论点，能够运用逻辑关系词，使得句子之间衔接较为连贯。

原文：In brief, being practical is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality ;additionally, we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of daydreaming to ensure our growth stays on course.

批改：该段再次总结强调写作的中心，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，注意主谓一致问题。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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