2014年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2014年考研英语二大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文万能句型的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart depicts the changement of urban population and rural population in China.In 1990 years,the number of urban population was 300 millions, but by 2010 years, this figure had gradually risen to 666 millions.In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline about 160 millions during the same time from 1900 years to 2010 years.

The reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summanized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society , people"s living habits have undergone significant changes, this explains why an increasing number of people choose to live in the city. Additional,Chinese society is undering an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s economy developement.

What about future trends?I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：changement

批改：change，本身可以作名词

原文：years

批改：去掉，in 1990就代表在1990年

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：years

批改：去掉

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：years

批改：去掉

原文：years

批改：去掉

原文：The bar chart depicts the changement of urban population and rural population in China.In 1990 years,the number of urban population was 300 millions, but by 2010 years, this figure had gradually risen to 666 millions.In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline about 160 millions during the same time from 1900 years to 2010 years.

批改：注意：数字+hundred，thousand，million和billion，用单数，不需要加s

原文：summanized

批改：summarized

原文：this

批改：前加and连接两个分句

原文：Additional

批改：Additionally

原文：undering

批改：undergoing

原文：economy

批改：economic

原文：The reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summanized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society , people"s living habits have undergone significant changes, this explains why an increasing number of people choose to live in the city. Additional,Chinese society is undering an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s economy developement.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：What about future trends?I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，注意英语中年份的写法；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，注意用连接词连接两个分句；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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