2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depict the changes about urban population and rural population in china over the past 20 years, the number of urban population was 300 millions, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 millions. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 millions during the same period.

The corn reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china"s urban development in responding to these changes. Consequently, an urban development village has startal becoming city. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, living in the city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Considering these, factors the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the population of rural area will likely contince to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：depict

批改：单三depicts

原文：china

批改：国家名首字母大写

原文：over the past 20 years,

批改：相对于现在并不是过去的20年，改成from 1990 to 2010

原文：,

批改：句号

原文：the

批改：首字母大写

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：The bar chart clearly depict the changes about urban population and rural population in china over the past 20 years, the number of urban population was 300 millions, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 millions. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 millions during the same period.

批改：注意：数字+hundred，thousand，million和billion，用单数，不需要加s

原文：corn

批改：core

原文：chinese

批改：Chinese

原文：china"s

批改：China"s

原文：an urban development village has startal becoming city.

批改：中式表达，不符合语法，建议改成：more and more rural people move to the cities to pursue better lives

原文：,

批改：逗号要在factors的后面

原文：The corn reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china"s urban development in responding to these changes. Consequently, an urban development village has startal becoming city. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, living in the city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Considering these, factors the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

原文：contince

批改：continue

原文：what about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the population of rural area will likely contince to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，国家名是专有名词首字母大写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意主谓一致以及避免重视表达。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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