2021年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二写作冲刺每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2021年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2021年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2021年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2021年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the breakdown percentage of exercise ways of inhabitants in a certain city. Alone exercise takes the lead at 54.3%, followed by exercising with friends at 47.7%. Additionally, factors such as exercising with family and group activity are also considered, accounting for 23.9%and15.8%, respectively.

The core reasons for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspects of our lives, particularly altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of people have started paying more attention to health. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, people are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, doing exercise has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures truthfully and accurately reflect the choice of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：breakdown percentage

批改： percentage breakdown

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the breakdown percentage of exercise ways of inhabitants in a certain city. Alone exercise takes the lead at 54.3%, followed by exercising with friends at 47.7%. Additionally, factors such as exercising with family and group activity are also considered, accounting for 23.9%and15.8%, respectively.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspects of our lives, particularly altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of people have started paying more attention to health. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, people are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, doing exercise has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures truthfully and accurately reflect the choice of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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