2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of market"s share about some brands in domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of proportion of domestic brand was 26%, but by 2009,this rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a significant decline of 9% during the same period. simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady .

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, Against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2005, are accustomed to using domestic appliances and have have become the primary consumer group. This explains why an increasing number of people choose domestic cars rather than imported cars.

what about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand will steadily increase in following decades.In contrast,the proportion of imported brand will likely continue to decrease .

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：proportion of

批改：多余，删去

原文：simultaneously

批改：S大写

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of market"s share about some brands in domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of proportion of domestic brand was 26%, but by 2009,this rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a significant decline of 9% during the same period. simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady .

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：Against

批改：逗号后单词小写

原文：2005

批改：2000s

原文：have

批改：重复删去

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, Against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2005, are accustomed to using domestic appliances and have have become the primary consumer group. This explains why an increasing number of people choose domestic cars rather than imported cars.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

原文：at about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand will steadily increase in following decades.In contrast,the proportion of imported brand will likely continue to decrease .

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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