2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2014年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二大作文话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The chart illustrates the changes in China’s urban and rural populations over the 20-year period from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, rural residents accounted for a large majority, with 834 million people, while the urban population was merely 300 million. By 2000, the urban population had risen noticeably to 458 million, and the rural population slightly decreased to 807 million. In 2010, the urban population reached 666 million, which was nearly equal to the rural population of 674 million.

This trend is a clear sign of China’s rapid urbanization. On one hand, cities offer far more job opportunities, better education resources, and advanced medical services, which continuously attract rural laborers to relocate. On the other hand, this large-scale population shift also brings problems: urban areas are burdened with overcrowding and traffic jams, while rural regions face a shortage of working-age people. Therefore, balancing urban expansion and rural development is crucial for sustainable social progress.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The chart illustrates the changes in China’s urban and rural populations over the 20-year period from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, rural residents accounted for a large majority, with 834 million people, while the urban population was merely 300 million. By 2000, the urban population had risen noticeably to 458 million, and the rural population slightly decreased to 807 million. In 2010, the urban population reached 666 million, which was nearly equal to the rural population of 674 million.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：This trend is a clear sign of China’s rapid urbanization. On one hand, cities offer far more job opportunities, better education resources, and advanced medical services, which continuously attract rural laborers to relocate. On the other hand, this large-scale population shift also brings problems: urban areas are burdened with overcrowding and traffic jams, while rural regions face a shortage of working-age people. Therefore, balancing urban expansion and rural development is crucial for sustainable social progress.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬，再接再厉。

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