2019年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2019年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts certain college graduate circumstance in 2013 and 2018.In 2013,the percentage of getting a job was 68.1 percent, but by 2018, the proportion of getting a job was 60.7 percent. In contrast, the percentage of further education experiencd a significant increase of 7.7 percent during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of starting busniess remained stable.

The core reasons for the obversed phenonmenon can be summarized as follows. To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education.In addition, China"s society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation.In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is significant progress made by Chinese education in responding of these changes.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about the future trend? I am confident tha the above statisitical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students,serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：certain college graduate circumstance

批改：graduation destinations of graduates at a certain university

原文：68.1 percent

批改：68.1%

原文：percent.

批改：换成%

原文：percent

批改：%

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts certain college graduate circumstance in 2013 and 2018.In 2013,the percentage of getting a job was 68.1 percent, but by 2018, the proportion of getting a job was 60.7 percent. In contrast, the percentage of further education experiencd a significant increase of 7.7 percent during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of starting busniess remained stable.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：phenonmenon

批改：phenomenon

原文： of

批改：to

原文：he core reasons for the obversed phenonmenon can be summarized as follows. To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education.In addition, China"s society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation.In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is significant progress made by Chinese education in responding of these changes.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：tha

批改：that

原文：What about the future trend? I am confident tha the above statisitical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students,serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，固定短语要记牢；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础还不错。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题，另外，在描述图表内容时注意语言的准确性。再接再厉。

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