考研英语一2017年大作文怎么写？附例文批改

面对2017年考研英语一大作文，许多同学最关心的是有没有可复制的写作模板。本文带来的高分范文严格遵循考研英语作文模板高分框架，从开头引入、主体论证到结尾呼应，全文清晰流畅，是考研英语考生的必备学习资料。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

第三部分:写作A节

51. As can be seen in two simple but enlightening pictures, there is a person facing some books. In the left one, this person is laying on the chair comfortably and saying" I have a lot of books". In sharp contrast, in the right one, this person intends to read 20 books this year. Finally, several Chinese characters can be noticed, which read" Having books and reading books."

Such a scenario, obviously, can be associated with some young people who are characterized by laziness, planning to read books but they never do these plans. In the contemporary society, these behavious are reported by the media frequently. Theretore, we are supposed to object to these awful behaviours. It is no exaggeration to say that making a detailed plan and finishing it regularly is the catalyst of both human progress and society development. Admittedly, what is important is to accomplish tasks and plan what we are to do next.

In conclusion, as a youngster, I am convinced

that it is advisable for all people to do something instead of just thinking. Thus, we will make better progress.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：is a person

批改：are two persons

原文：laying

批改：lie的现在进行时是lying

原文：As can be seen in two simple but enlightening pictures, there is a person facing some books. In the left one, this person is laying on the chair comfortably and saying" I have a lot of books". In sharp contrast, in the right one, this person intends to read 20 books this year. Finally, several Chinese characters can be noticed, which read" Having books and reading books."

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

原文：society

批改：改成形容词social

原文：Such a scenario, obviously, can be associated with some young people who are characterized by laziness, planning to read books but they never do these plans. In the contemporary society, these behavious are reported by the media frequently. Theretore, we are supposed to object to these awful behaviours. It is no exaggeration to say that making a detailed plan and finishing it regularly is the catalyst of both human progress and society development. Admittedly, what is important is to accomplish tasks and plan what we are to do next.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：Theretore

批改：Therefore

原文：n conclusion, as a youngster, I am convinced that it is advisable for all people to do something instead of just thinking. Thus, we will make better progress.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误，要注意区分词性；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误会更好，还要注意图画描述的准确性。继续加油。

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