2015年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2015年考研英语二大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文话题的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the spending that residents in a certain city of our country made during the Spring Festival holiday. Presents takes the lead at 40%, followed by the meal gathering. the transportation expenses, and others，each accounting for 20%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China. Since ancient times, people have attached great importance to the Spring Festival, and there is a saying of "buying New Year goods". In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also desire gain spiritual satisfaction. Furthermore, from an individual perspective, people are under tremendous pressure. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of our, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：takes

批改：注意主谓一致，改成take

批改：逗号

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the spending that residents in a certain city of our country made during the Spring Festival holiday. Presents takes the lead at 40%, followed by the meal gathering. the transportation expenses, and others，each accounting for 20%.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

批改：加to以避免一句话出现两个谓语

原文：Furthermore, from an individual perspective, people are under tremendous pressure.

批改：这句话和主题没有关系

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China. Since ancient times, people have attached great importance to the Spring Festival, and there is a saying of "buying New Year goods". In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also desire gain spiritual satisfaction. Furthermore, from an individual perspective, people are under tremendous pressure. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：our

批改：后加residents

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of our, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；语法方面，注意主谓一致以及一句话只能有一个谓语。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题，还要注意论点要与作文主题相关。再接再厉。

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