2011年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

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一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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The bar chart clearly dipicts the changes of some brands in domestic car markets from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was 25%, but by 2009, this rate has gradually risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese hrands experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic develop ment, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the significant progress was made by China"s automotive industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the percentage of domestic trends will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease. 必须使用黑色字迹笔书写:在答题卡区域内作答,超出黑色矩形边框限定区域的答案无效,

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：dipicts

批改：depicts

原文：hrands

批改：brands

原文：The bar chart clearly dipicts the changes of some brands in domestic car markets from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was 25%, but by 2009, this rate has gradually risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese hrands experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic develop ment, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the significant progress was made by China"s automotive industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：trends

批改：brands

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the percentage of domestic trends will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上拼写错误问题。再接再厉。

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