2025年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of survey of the elders’ mainly entertainment in their daily life in a certain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by walking at 68.3%. Additionally, factors such as taking care of flowers, reading and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8% and 18.4%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound television system, enabling the seniors to have ample choices for entertainment. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of diseases has impacted every aspect of our lives, significantly altering people’s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of individuals have started paying more attention to health. That’s why more elders choose walking as their daily resting activities. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the elders, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decade.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：factors

批改：改为activities（活动）更准确

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of survey of the elders’ mainly entertainment in their daily life in a certain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by walking at 68.3%. Additionally, factors such as taking care of flowers, reading and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8% and 18.4%, respectively.

批改：对图表的描述较为全面，注意个别表达的优化

原文：resting activities

批改：搭配不当，休闲活动应该用 leisure activities

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound television system, enabling the seniors to have ample choices for entertainment. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of diseases has impacted every aspect of our lives, significantly altering people’s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of individuals have started paying more attention to health. That’s why more elders choose walking as their daily resting activities. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：从传媒发展、健康需求角度分析了看电视和散步占比较高的原因，注意个别词汇的搭配

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of the elders, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decade.

批改：表达个人观点，语言通顺

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

题目要求：对图表信息描绘全面准确，个人观点及论述内容符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了较多的模板句，仅有个别搭配错误，表达上较为清晰通顺；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段分析原因，第三表达观点，整体架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；保持日常写作练习；

这篇完成得很好，继续保持啊~

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