2015年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的启航考研英语高分范文。本文呈现的2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart breaks down spending by citizen during the spring Festival holiday in the certain city.The spending of spring Festival gift is largest catagory,occupying 40%.The proportion of transportation,parting dinner and others is same occupying 20% respectively.

The data indicates that people usually like to give gifts to others during the Spring Festival.It can help enhance relationship.The proportion pointed to a cultural public.During the Spring Festival,people usually go home to eat family reunion dinner by transportation.People also visit their friends and eat dinner gathering.The data suggests chinese traditional culture.People also more and more pay attention to emotional communication.

All in all,the data suggests healthy traditional culture,a trend of value to both citizen and the nation.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： by citize

批改：by citizen -> by citizens (名词复数错误)

原文：spring Festi

批改：spring Festival -> Spring Festival (专有名词，首字母应大写)

原文：certain city

批改：in the certain city -> in a certain city (冠词使用错误，首次提及应用 a)

原文：nding of spring Fes

批改：The spending of spring Festival gift is largest catagory -> Expenditure on Spring Festival gifts is the largest category (主谓搭配不当，spending 与 is category 不搭配；catagory 拼写错误)

原文：,parting dinner an

批改：parting dinner -> festive gatherings 或 reunion dinners (严重用词错误，parting dinner 意为“离别宴”，与春节语境完全相反)

原文：s same occupying 20

批改：is same occupying 20% respectively -> each account for 20%

原文：he pie chart breaks down spending by citizen during the spring Festival holiday in the certain city.The spending of spring Festival gift is largest catagory,occupying 40%.The proportion of transportation,parting dinner and others is same occupying 20% respectively.

批改：段准确地列出了所有数据，完成了图表描述的核心任务。但语言的准确性是主要问题

原文：nhance relationship.The proportion pointed to a cultura

批改：enhance relationship -> enhance relationships (名词单复数错误) The proportion pointed to a cultural public.：此句表意不清，无法理解。推测您可能想表达“这反映了一种公共文化”或“社会现象”。

原文：d eat dinner gath

批改：eat dinner gathering -> attend dinner gatherings (动词使用不当，attend gatherings 是固定搭配)

原文： chinese traditional culture.People also more and more pay attention to emotional communication

批改：chinese -> Chinese (专有形容词，首字母应大写) People also more and more pay attention to... -> People are also paying increasing attention to...

原文：data indicates that people usually like to give gifts to others during the Spring Festival.It can help enhance relationship.The proportion pointed to a cultural public.During the Spring Festival,people usually go home to eat family reunion dinner by transportation.People also visit their friends and eat dinner gathering.The data suggests chinese traditional culture.People also more and more pay attention to emotional commu

批改：本段的论点（送礼、团聚、情感交流）本身是正确且相关的

原文：,the data suggests healthy traditional culture,a trend of value to both citizen and the nation.

批改：suggests healthy traditional culture -> suggests a healthy traditional culture (缺少不定冠词 a) ,a trend of value to both citizen and the nation：这是一个句子片段，不是一个完整的句子。它缺少谓语动词，无法独立存在。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8分

基本完成了试题规定的任务，包含了多数内容要点。但未能有效阐述一些内容要点（如第二段逻辑不清），并且有较多语法及词汇错误，影响了理解。

总评：

同学，你好！你具备捕捉文化内涵的能力。你能从花销比例中看出“情感交流”和“传统文化”，这是写好评论性段落的关键。

1. 语言方面：

当前最需要关注的是语言的基础构建。文中出现了大量影响理解的错误，从拼写、冠词到句子结构。特别是第二段的逻辑断裂和第三段的句子片段，你需要加强如何将零散的词汇和观点组织成语法正确、意义完整的句子。

2. 结构方面：

你具备了“描述-分析-总结”的结构意识。但在内容上，需要将零散的观点“串珠成链”。你的好想法（观点珍珠）需要用地道的表达和逻辑连接词（金线）串联起来，才能成为一条漂亮的项链。

总的修改建议：

建立逻辑连接：在段落中，使用 Furthermore（此外）, This demonstrates that...（这表明...）, Therefore（因此）等词语，让句子之间产生联系。

对于“年夜饭”等特定文化概念，务必查证其准确英文表达（如 family reunion dinner），避免产生严重的误解。

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