2024年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的考研英语作文模板高分范文。本文呈现的2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、2024年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This is a column chart that clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in the main harvest of college students" labour practice course. Overall, learning relevant knowledge have the largest proportion of students" main attainment, at 91.3%. The next are promoting hands - on ability and collaborative ability, at 84.8% and 54% respectively. Finally came happy mood, at 32.6%.

Such statistics can be associated with the importance of labour practice among students in college, but what resulted in this phenomenon? For one thing, college students are characterized by the desire for promoting their ability and learning knowledge, which enable students to take labour practice course to achieve their goal. For another thing, labour practice will bring students happy mood, arouse their passion for life, and help them make progress.

As a student who is preparing for the national entrance exams for postgraduate studies, I deem it is necessary for us to take labour practice ,due to it can help us keep healthy.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：have

批改：has 第三人称单数形式

原文：came

批改：comes 注意时态一致

原文：This is a column chart that clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in the main harvest of college students" labour practice course. Overall, learning relevant knowledge have the largest proportion of students" main attainment, at 91.3%. The next are promoting hands - on ability and collaborative ability, at 84.8% and 54% respectively. Finally came happy mood, at 32.6%.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：enable

批改：enables 第三人称单数形式

原文：Such statistics can be associated with the importance of labour practice among students in college, but what resulted in this phenomenon? For one thing, college students are characterized by the desire for promoting their ability and learning knowledge, which enable students to take labour practice course to achieve their goal. For another thing, labour practice will bring students happy mood, arouse their passion for life, and help them make progress.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：As a student who is preparing for the national entrance exams for postgraduate studies, I deem it is necessary for us to take labour practice ,due to it can help us keep healthy.

批改：联系自身，总结全文，升华主题

原文：due to

批改：due to后面不能接句子，这边建议改为because/since

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

语法：需要注意一些基础的语法问题和表达搭配问题，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

内容：从图表中可以看出，知识和动手能力提升显著，说明课程注重实践与理论结合；合作能力提升比例较低，可能与课程设计或学生参与度有关。结合现实意义：劳动实践课有助于学生将理论应用于实际，提升综合能力，同时对心理健康有积极影响。最后可提出建议，课程可增加团队合作项目，进一步提升学生协作能力，同时保持课程的趣味性和实用性。

整体来看，主要是细节错误，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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