2013年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

面对2013年考研英语二大作文，许多同学最关心的是有没有可复制的写作模板。本文带来的高分范文严格遵循考研英语作文模板高分框架，从开头引入、主体论证到结尾呼应，全文清晰流畅，是考研英语考生的必备学习资料。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the part-time job of students at a certain university. In the first year of university, the percetage of part-time job was 67.77%, but by the third year of university, the rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the proportion of part-time job experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the third year of university to graduate year.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present. "Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, looking for part-time job has emerged as their significant choice for acquiring job experience. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, part-time job is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering trese factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about the future trends? I am confident that the proportion of part-time job will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：part-time job

批改：proportion of taking part-time jobs

原文：part-time

批改：前加taking

原文： part-time

批改：前加taking

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the part-time job of students at a certain university. In the first year of university, the percetage of part-time job was 67.77%, but by the third year of university, the rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the proportion of part-time job experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the third year of university to graduate year.

批改：将图表中的内容描述的很全面细致，但是要注意句子内容的完整

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present. "Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, looking for part-time job has emerged as their significant choice for acquiring job experience. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, part-time job is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering trese factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：part-time

批改：前加taking

原文：What about the future trends? I am confident that the proportion of part-time job will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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