考研英语一2025年大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2025年考研英语一大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语一写作冲刺备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

Observably, the data-backed chart with insightful details presents the survey on the average number of major consumer goods per 100 households in China from 2014 to 2023. As is statistically indicated, the number of washing machines rose from 83.7 to 98.2, and that of ice machines increased from 83.7 to 98.2- both exhibiting an upward trajectory. What captures our attention is that the ownership of air machines has nearly doubled. soaring from 75.2 to 145.9.

Far from being a random dipiction, the chart serves as a reminder of the truth that a steady growth in household disposable income, fueled by economic boom and prosperity. For one thing, since the Reform and Opening-up. there has been a pronounced rise in people’s living standards us a result of the burgeoning growth in China"s economy. For another. during the 14th Five-Year Plan period, continuous endeavors have been directed toward the technological innovation of national brands.

Given the aforementioned discussion, a pertinent conclusion can be drawn that the significance of economic prosperity can never be overstated.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：ice machines

批改：冰箱是refrigerators

原文：air machines

批改：空调air conditioners

原文：Observably, the data-backed chart with insightful details presents the survey on the average number of major consumer goods per 100 households in China from 2014 to 2023. As is statistically indicated, the number of washing machines rose from 83.7 to 98.2, and that of ice machines increased from 83.7 to 98.2- both exhibiting an upward trajectory. What captures our attention is that the ownership of air machines has nearly doubled. soaring from 75.2 to 145.9.

批改：能够完整描述出图画中的内容，语言连贯，

原文：that a steady growth in household disposable income,

批改：that引导的从句里没有谓语，不是个句子，改成：that the household disposable income has a steady growth,

原文：us

批改：as

批改：逗号

原文：Far from being a random dipiction, the chart serves as a reminder of the truth that a steady growth in household disposable income, fueled by economic boom and prosperity. For one thing, since the Reform and Opening-up. there has been a pronounced rise in people’s living standards us a result of the burgeoning growth in China"s economy. For another. during the 14th Five-Year Plan period, continuous endeavors have been directed toward the technological innovation of national brands.

批改：论述的内容较为全面，运用逻辑关系词使得句与句之间衔接较为紧密。

原文：Given the aforementioned discussion, a pertinent conclusion can be drawn that the significance of economic prosperity can never be overstated.

批改：起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误以及图片中一些单词的表达；句式方面，注意句子结构的完整，从句里不要缺少成分；逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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