2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts 2008-2009 arand marketing of car. In 2008, the percentage of China brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 30%. Meanwhile, the proportion of Japan brand experienced a around significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the obseved phenomenon canbe summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancetwent of soliety, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoymest. This explains why an increasing nunber of people choose green transportation rather than traditional fuel-based options. In addtion, Chinese society is undergoing an extersive and profound transformation. considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brand will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：arand marketing

批改：arand marketing 是拼写错误，应为 brand market 或 market share of different car brands

原文：China brand

批改：China brand / Japan brand / American brand：这里需要用所有格或形容词形式，即 Chinese brands / Japanese brands / American brands，或者 cars made in China/Japan/America。

原文：a around

批改：a around significant decline：a 和 around 重复，删除 a，保留 around a significant decline 或 a significant decline of about。

原文： bar chart clearly depicts 2008-2009 arand marketing of car. In 2008, the percentage of China brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 30%. Meanwhile, the proportion of Japan brand experienced a around significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

批改：你准确地描述了三大品牌阵营的基本趋势（国产品牌上升，日系品牌下降，美系品牌稳定），并且使用了 substantially risen, experienced a decline, remained stable 等地道表达，这非常好。主要的失分点在于核心术语的拼写错误和关键数据的不准确，这两点需要优先修正

原文： obseved phe

批改：obseved 拼写错误，应为 observed。

原文：n canbe summarized as follows. To st

批改：canbe 应分开，为 can be。 advancetwent 拼写错误，应为 advancement。

原文： soliet

批改：soliety 拼写错误，应为 society。

原文： enjoymes

批改：enjoymest 拼写错误，应为 enjoyment

原文：nunber o

批改：nunber 拼写错误，应为 number。

原文：extersive

批改：

原文： considering

批改：considering 首字母未大写，应为 Considering

原文： core reasons for the obseved phenomenon canbe summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancetwent of soliety, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoymest. This explains why an increasing nunber of people choose green transportation rather than traditional fuel-based options. In addtion, Chinese society is undergoing an extersive and profound transformation. considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：本段的开头和结尾句式很好，但是密集的拼写错误也影响了语言的质量

原文：hinese bran

批改：Chinese brand 同样应改为复数 Chinese brands。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9分

你的作文框架是清晰的，这是你的优势。但目前，两方面的因素阻碍了你获得更高的分数：1) 论证逻辑与图表内容的脱节；2) 影响理解的拼写错误。

给你的核心提升建议：

确保论证紧扣图表：在分析原因时，要时刻问自己：“我这个论点能直接解释图表中的变化吗？” 针对“国产品牌份额上升”，更直接的原因可以是：

国产品牌质量与设计的提升 (The quality and design of Chinese cars have improved significantly.)

更具竞争力的价格与性价比 (They offer better value for money.)

消费者爱国情绪与对本土品牌信心的增长 (Growing patriotism and consumer confidence in domestic brands.)

拼写检查：请务必在写完作文后，留出时间专门检查拼写。建议你准备一个单词本，记录下高频拼错的词（如society, observed, number等），反复记忆。

丰富结尾段：在预测后，用“鉴于以上原因”或“随着这种趋势持续”等短语稍作补充，使结尾更完整。

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