考研英语一2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2011年考研英语一高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists, sitting in the boat, and throwing the rubbish into the river, which pollutes the water. Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that environmental pollution is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, neglecting environmental pollution is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress, significantly affecting its international image. What is more, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulationa might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lies in the fact that some individuals, in their pursuit of enconmic interests, have disregarded the virtue of protecting the environment.

How can we put an end to the problem of environmental pollution? It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including enhancing supervision and issuing related laws. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to help students cultivate more rational values. With the support of these measures, we effectively tackle the issue at its core.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：in the

批改：on a boat

原文：the

批改：不需要the

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists, sitting in the boat, and throwing the rubbish into the river, which pollutes the water. Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that environmental pollution is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述准确，引出下文

原文： regulationa

批改： ​​regulations​​

原文：enconmic

批改： ​​economic

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, neglecting environmental pollution is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress, significantly affecting its international image. What is more, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulationa might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lies in the fact that some individuals, in their pursuit of enconmic interests, have disregarded the virtue of protecting the environment.

批改：词汇和句型丰富

原文：effectively

批改：前面加个can

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16/20

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，分段清晰；

2.应用的语法结构和词汇非常丰富，非谓语结构、同位语从句和which定语从句都有体现，运用想当得体。

3.衔接顺序自然，层次分明，逻辑词使用很棒。

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，与自己的基础相结合，形成自己的写作风格，应该不同类型的考题，加油！

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