考研英语一2017年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语一作文模板每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2017年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the picture on the left, a person sits beside a bookcase that spans an entire wall, filled to the brim with books. Yet the individual merely lounges there, boasting about owning such a large collection without taking any action to read them. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, there is a man sitting at his desk reading a book, murmuring that he will strive to finish 20 books this year. Several Chinese characters can be noticed below the pictures, which say "‘Collecting Books’ vs. ‘Reading Books’".

As is vividly depicted in the two pictures, the contrast between "collecting books" and "reading books" perfectly reflects the essence of the Chinese idiom "Lord Ye"s love for dragons". In the first picture, the man claims to cherish books, yet his affection is merely superficial, just as Lord Ye admired dragons in paintings but fled in terror when facing a real one. Many of us may just like the man in the first picture and Lord Ye. We accumulate reference books and sign up for numerous online courses, yet end up leaving them untouched due to laziness or lack of perseverance. Such empty enthusiasm wastes efforts and blocks progress, while consistent action like daily reading or regular practice paves the way for growth.

In brief, true love for knowledge, or any pursuit, lies not in empty boasts or mere possession, but in the courage to resolve and the perseverance to act. Only by bridging the gap between "wanting" and "doing" can we avoid being like Lord Ye, and truly harvest the fruits of our efforts in study and life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：In the picture on the left, a person sits beside a bookcase that spans an entire wall, filled to the brim with books. Yet the individual merely lounges there, boasting about owning such a large collection without taking any action to read them. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, there is a man sitting at his desk reading a book, murmuring that he will strive to finish 20 books this year. Several Chinese characters can be noticed below the pictures, which say "‘Collecting Books’ vs. ‘Reading Books’".

批改：描述漫画内容，揭示漫画背后所反映的社会现象和深刻哲理，清晰直观。

原文：As is vividly depicted in the two pictures, the contrast between "collecting books" and "reading books" perfectly reflects the essence of the Chinese idiom "Lord Ye"s love for dragons". In the first picture, the man claims to cherish books, yet his affection is merely superficial, just as Lord Ye admired dragons in paintings but fled in terror when facing a real one. Many of us may just like the man in the first picture and Lord Ye. We accumulate reference books and sign up for numerous online courses, yet end up leaving them untouched due to laziness or lack of perseverance. Such empty enthusiasm wastes efforts and blocks progress, while consistent action like daily reading or regular practice paves the way for growth.

批改：以分论点的形式论述行动的重要性，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：In brief, true love for knowledge, or any pursuit, lies not in empty boasts or mere possession, but in the courage to resolve and the perseverance to act. Only by bridging the gap between "wanting" and "doing" can we avoid being like Lord Ye, and truly harvest the fruits of our efforts in study and life.

批改：联系自身，总结全文，升华主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：20

作文对漫画的理解到位，写作思路紧扣主题，有些短语句式的表达也不错，能够传达清楚作者的写作意图。

细节：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：漫画“有书”仅代表知识的占有，若不阅读，书籍只是摆设。“读书”是知识内化的过程，通过阅读才能真正获取智慧、提升自我。强调行动力的重要性，批判只藏书不阅读的“伪学习”现象。

整体来看，作文理解了漫画内涵，段落框架明确，与题目要求保持一致，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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