考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

历年考研英语大作文命题往往聚焦社会、经济、文化与教育等核心话题。本文精解的2011年考研英语二真题，正是考研英语作文真题范文常考方向中的代表题。透过启航老师逐段批注，可帮助考生建立稳定的写作思路。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

英二2011大作文

The bar chart clearly depicts the market proportion of some brands among car market in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had risen to around 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japaness brand experiensed a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, more and more people can afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. And against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, a sense of national pride are growing, the younger generation, particulary those born in the 1970s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic brand and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive ecomomic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace and our manufacturing industry has a significant progress. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the market proportion of some brands among car market in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had risen to around 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japaness brand experiensed a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brand remained steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：are

批改：注意主谓一致，改成is

批改：加and连接两个并列分句

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, more and more people can afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. And against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, a sense of national pride are growing, the younger generation, particulary those born in the 1970s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic brand and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive ecomomic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace and our manufacturing industry has a significant progress. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意主谓一致以及两个并列分句用连接词连接。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

很多考研英语考生都遇到过写作时思路枯竭、句式单一的问题，本文精解的2011年考研英语二范文正是突破这一瓶颈的优质范本。启航教育写作主讲会针对考研英语二常考话题逐一拆解，让考研英语作文真题范文写作变得有迹可循。