2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2014年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of the number of people in villege and city from 1990 to 2000. In 1990, the number of people in city was 300 million,but by 2010, this figure had substantially rised to 666 million. In contrast, the number of people in villege experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford house in city that we were previously deemed luxury items.In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are prefer to work and live in city and have become the primary composition of people in city.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of people incity will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of people in villege will likely continue to decrease .

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：villege

批改：villages复数

原文：city

批改：cities复数

原文：city

批改：cities

原文：villege

批改：villages

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of the number of people in villege and city from 1990 to 2000. In 1990, the number of people in city was 300 million,but by 2010, this figure had substantially rised to 666 million. In contrast, the number of people in villege experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：在描述图表信息时要注意语言的准确性。

原文：we

批改：去掉

原文：house

批改：复数

原文：are

批改：谓语重复

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford house in city that we were previously deemed luxury items.In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are prefer to work and live in city and have become the primary composition of people in city.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：city

批改：复数

原文：villege

批改：villages

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of people incity will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of people in villege will likely continue to decrease .

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，名词单复数要使用正确；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构正确，不要有多余成分；语法方面，一句话只能有一个谓语。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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