考研英语一2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists sitting on the boat, enjoying the scenery and throwing garbage into the river, which pollutes the river. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that environmental pollution is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulations might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lies in the fact that some individuals, in their pursuit of economic interests, have disregarded the importance of protecting the environment. What is more, environmental pollution is llike a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress, not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its international image.

How can we put an end to the problem of environmental pollution. It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including issuing related laws and strengthening the guiding role of the media in public opinion. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to foster the virtue of protecting the environment deliberately. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists sitting on the boat, enjoying the scenery and throwing garbage into the river, which pollutes the river. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that environmental pollution is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulations might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lies in the fact that some individuals, in their pursuit of economic interests, have disregarded the importance of protecting the environment. What is more, environmental pollution is llike a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress, not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its international image.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：How can we put an end to the problem of environmental pollution. It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including issuing related laws and strengthening the guiding role of the media in public opinion. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to foster the virtue of protecting the environment deliberately. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

批改：该段再次总结强调写作的中心，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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