2015年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2015年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二作文模板话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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48. The pie chart clearly displays the percentage bre-akdown of Spring Festival"s expenses of citizens in a cer-tain city. The presents of new year take the lead at 40%, followed by traffic, eating together and others at 20%, resp-ectively

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allow-ing them to afford presents which were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an intensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the signifi-cant progress made by China"s economic growth in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in this chart is unsurprising.

What about the future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of citizens, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The presents of new year

批改：改为 New Year presents 更简洁，要注意专有名词实词的首字母要大写

原文：resp-ectively

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

原文：Spring Festival"s expenses of citizens

批改：改为 citizens" Spring Festival expenses 更地道

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，表达也很好

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：注意语言表达的地道性和简洁性，可结合作文批注仔细修改，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，试着多用自己的话来写，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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