考研英语一2016年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语一写作冲刺每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2016年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2016年大作文题目

考研英语一2016年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2016年大作文批改例文

Unfolding our eyes is an enlightening scene: A father is watching TV, saying that his son should study hard, while the other father is studing with his son together. The caption indicates that "It is better to set a good example than make demands."

Not until I saw this drawing did I realize the significance of parents’ teaching, which can be understood from the following three aspects. First and foremost, it is a truth widely acknowledged that all other factors being equal, a good example could be the decisive difference between success and failure. In addition, parents exert an remarkable influence on the development of a child"s character. Children, especially the younger, always imitate their parents" activity. Furthermore, all kinds of media channels, whether newspaper or the Internet, advocate that what truly matters is education, encouraging parents to set a good example.

Taking into account what has been argued, we can conclude that a good parent example is crucial, and more actions need to be taken. To be specific, educational institutions should provide guidance to infuse such an awareness into every parent. The more rapidly actions are taken, the more effectively this awareness will benefit us in the upcoming future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：tudin

批改：studying

原文：ing scene: A father is watching TV, saying that his son should study hard, while the other father is studing with his son together. The caption indicates that "It is better to set a good example than make demands."

批改：描述漫画还是比较到位的，句子 结构完整具体，句式多样，符合英文写作习惯和英文写作要求。

原文：g did I realize the significance of parents’ teaching, which can be understood from the following three aspects. First and foremost, it is a truth widely acknowledged that all other factors being equal, a good example could be the decisive difference between success and failure. In addition, parents exert an remarkable influence on the development of a child"s character. Children, especially the younger, always imitate their parents" activity. Furthermore, all kinds of media channels, whether newspaper or the Internet, advocate that what truly matters is education, encouraging parents to set a good exampl

批改：写的不错的哦，原因分析比较到位，适当，比较贴合题意和现实，句子结构符合英文写作要求。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

语法：语法注意studying不用去掉y哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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