2023年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2023年考研英语二高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语作文批改热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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This chart clearly displays the health literacy standards of our citizens from 2012 to 2021.In 2012,the percentage of citizens with health literacy status was 8.8%,but by 2021,this figure had increased exponentially to 25.4%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.First of all,with the continuous development of our society,the citizens" living standard has continued to improve,people have enough energy and money to spend on healthcare.In addition, technological progress has also played a significant role in this phenomenon.Considering these factors,the phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends?I am confident that the number of citizens" health literacy standards clear sign of social improvement and will increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：his chart clearly displays the health literacy standards of our citizens from 2012 to 2021.In 2012,the percentage of citizens with health literacy status was 8.8%,but by 2021,this figure had increased exponentially to 25.4%.

批改：清晰简要地描述了图表信息，言简意赅。

原文：people

批改：前加并列连词and

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.First of all,with the continuous development of our society,the citizens" living standard has continued to improve,people have enough energy and money to spend on healthcare.In addition, technological progress has also played a significant role in this phenomenon.Considering these factors,the phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：number

批改：proportion

批改：缺少：is a

原文：What about future trends?I am confident that the number of citizens" health literacy standards clear sign of social improvement and will increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇掌握较好；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；语法方面，两个并列分句之间要用连接词连接。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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