2014年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

2014年考研英语二大作文是启航考研英语备考清单中的必练题型。本文带来的高分批改范例，配套启航教育老师的逐句批注与预测话题标签，适合考研英语考生在冲刺阶段精读精练，是一套完整的写作提升资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in. China"s urban and rural population. In 1990, the number of urban population is 300 million, and the rural population is 834 million. But by the 2000, this figure of urban had substantially risen to 458 million, and the rural population had gradually decreased to 807 million In contrast from 2000 to 2010, the urban population. continued to grow rapidly and had reached to 666 million. Simultaneously, the decline of rural population had accelerated, dropping to 674 million.

Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundametal reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s fast-growing economy. Apainst the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic develpment, people find cities far more appealing than countryside. Considering this factor, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about the future trend?I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the future.In contract,the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：删除

原文：is

批改：过去时态was

原文： is

批改：was

原文：million In

批改：中间加句号

批改：删除

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in. China"s urban and rural population. In 1990, the number of urban population is 300 million, and the rural population is 834 million. But by the 2000, this figure of urban had substantially risen to 458 million, and the rural population had gradually decreased to 807 million In contrast from 2000 to 2010, the urban population. continued to grow rapidly and had reached to 666 million. Simultaneously, the decline of rural population had accelerated, dropping to 674 million.

批改：较准确描述了图表内容，注意时态和标点

原文：Considering this factor

批改： these factors

原文： Apainst

批改：Against

原文：trend

批改：trends

原文：stable

批改：副词修饰动词，steadily

原文：Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundametal reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s fast-growing economy. Apainst the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic develpment, people find cities far more appealing than countryside. Considering this factor, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：这一段可以借鉴模板，先说这种现象背后的原因如下，首先...其次...最后，这样行文更流畅，内容字数更多更丰富

原文：contract

批改：contrast

原文：What about the future trend?I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the future.In contract,the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease stable.

批改：good，总结趋势，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，注意拼写、标点和语法错误；

2.运用复杂高级词汇，建议第二段多使用非谓语结构，各类从句，充分展开自己的观点；

3.建议第二段加入逻辑连接词，使内容更加丝滑连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，灵活运用，丰富自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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