2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的考研英语作文模板高分范文。本文呈现的2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the populations of Chinese urban and countryside from 1990 to 2010.In 1990,the number of urban populations was 300,but by 2010,this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast

, the number of countryside populations experienced a slow decline of 160 during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace,allowing them to afford urban houses that were previously deemed luxury items.In addition,in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society,people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction;they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to live in urban rather than countryside options. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends?I am confident that the number of the urban populations is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast,the number of countryside populations will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： the populations of Chine

批改：the populations of Chinese urban and countryside：搭配不当。urban和countryside是形容词，不能直接与of这样使用。应改为 the population in Chinese urban and rural areas 或 the urban and rural population in China。

原文：number of urban populatio

批改：the number of urban populations：population 作为“人口”整体时是不可数名词，不应加s。应改为 the urban population。

原文：s 300,but by 2010,this figur

批改：你直接使用了“300”和“666”，会让人误以为是300和666个人。根据图表，单位是“百万”，因此应表述为 300 million 和 666 million。这是图表作文的关键细节。

原文： bar chart clearly depicts the populations of Chinese urban and countryside from 1990 to 2010.In 1990,the number of urban populations was 300,but by 2010,this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast , the number of countryside populations experienced a slow decline of 160 during the same period.

批改：你准确地抓住了城乡人口一升一降的核心趋势，并使用了 substantially risen 和 experienced a slow decline 等优秀表达，趋势描述非常清晰。

原文：ore reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace,allowing them to afford urban houses that were previously deemed luxury items.In addition,in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society,people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction;they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to live in urban rather than countryside options. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：第二个原因“人们追求精神享受”与“搬到城市居住”之间的直接因果链条不够紧密。城市确实能提供更多精神文化产品，但你需要把这个逻辑点明，而不是让读者去推断。可以更直接地 linking：Urban areas offer richer cultural and spiritual amenities, such as museums, theaters, and diverse communities, which attract people seeking more than just material comforts.

原文：ore reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace,allowing them to afford urban houses that were previously deemed luxury items.In addition,in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society,people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction;they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to live in urban rather than countryside options. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsur

批改：本段的亮点极为突出！你再次使用了“as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes”这一精妙的比喻，并且第一个原因（政府提升购买力）的论述非常有力、贴切。这展示了你的语言积累和思维深度。第二个原因的角度是好的，但需要强化其与城镇化现象的直接论证关系

原文：number of the urban p

批改：the number of the urban populations：同上，应为 the urban population。

原文：ns will likely continue to

批改：will likely continue to decrease relatively stable：这是一个语义矛盾。decrease（下降）和 stable（稳定）不能同时发生。应改为 will likely continue to decrease 或 will remain relatively stable，根据图表趋势，应选择前者。

原文：hat about future trends?I am confident that the number of the urban populations is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast,the number of countryside populations will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

批改：你对未来趋势做出了清晰的预测，并且将城市人口增长与社会进步联系起来，提升了论述高度，做得很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11分

这篇作文清晰地表明，你不仅完全掌握了考研英语二大作文的写作范式，更具备了运用高级修辞和复杂句式来提升文章档次的能力。你的文章结构完整，逻辑连贯，论证有深度。

请务必确保核心概念（如urban/rural population）的表达绝对地道，数据单位（如million）清晰无误。

在提出每一个论点后，都要确保其与主题的关联是直接、明确、无需推断的。

实施检查：在检查完拼写语法后，最后一步是通读全文，确保没有任何语义上的矛盾或模糊之处。

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