考研英语一2016年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2016年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2016年大作文题目

考研英语一2016年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2016年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there are a man sitting in the sofa and saying to the boy" Son, you should learn hard for me". On the contrary,in the right-hand portrayal, the farther study with his son together. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that company of father is the brush that paints bright future, while neglecting company of farther is the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in servial ways,but two of them are particularly significant.On the one hand, company of farther can nurture children"s souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuring. on the other hand, neglecting company of farther is like a heavy chain that hinders children"s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in future society.

In brief, company of farther is the catalyst for socital and personal development from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice; additionally. we must be actuely aware of the detrimental effects of neglecting company of farther to ensure our growth stays on course.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：are

批改：is

原文：farther

批改：father

原文：study

批改：单三studies

原文：farther

批改：

原文：In the left-hand cartoon, there are a man sitting in the sofa and saying to the boy" Son, you should learn hard for me". On the contrary,in the right-hand portrayal, the farther study with his son together. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that company of father is the brush that paints bright future, while neglecting company of farther is the shackle that hinders progress.

批改：对图画中的细节描述的很全面，但是要避免小的语言问题。

原文：servial

批改：several

原文：farther

批改：

原文：consuring

批改：consuming

原文：on

批改：首字母大写

原文：farther

批改：

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in servial ways,but two of them are particularly significant.On the one hand, company of farther can nurture children"s souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuring. on the other hand, neglecting company of farther is like a heavy chain that hinders children"s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in future society.

批改：能够通过正反两方面进行论述来突出论点，能够运用逻辑关系词，使得句子之间衔接较为连贯。

原文：farther

批改：

原文：socital

批改：

批改：加逗号断句

批改：逗号

原文：farther

批改：

原文：In brief, company of farther is the catalyst for socital and personal development from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice; additionally. we must be actuely aware of the detrimental effects of neglecting company of farther to ensure our growth stays on course.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面，注意正确使用标点断句；语法方面，注意主谓一致问题。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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