考研英语一2010年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语一作文模板每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2010年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

作日2010英一大作文

Nutritious and tasteful, in the hot-pot are those irresistible dishes, including Chinese kung-fu, Shakespeare, traditional confucian culture values and so on, which are regarded as a splendid cultural feast for both China and the West.

Considering the issue of cultural blending, I can think no better exemplification than the Silk Road, which is a timeless symbol of cross-cultural interaction. Crops such as grapes were introduced to China, enriching its agricultural landscape. Simultaneously, Chinese silks and papermaking tech niques were spread to the West, profoundly influencing civilizations among the route. Likewise, the Dunhuang murals, a magnificent combination of Indian religious art and traditional Chinese painting, stand as a vivid proof. Buddhism, after its arrival in China, was intergrated with Taoism and Confucianism, as evidenced by Wang Wei"s peaceful poems.

In conclusion, cultural blending enriches globally. To promote it, we should embrace diverse cultures openly and act as cultivated communicators and implementers.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Nutritious and tasteful, in the hot-pot are those irresistible dishes, including Chinese kung-fu, Shakespeare, traditional confucian culture values and so on, which are regarded as a splendid cultural feast for both China and the West.

批改：描述漫画内容，揭示漫画背后所反映的社会现象和深刻哲理，清晰直观。

原文：tech niques

批改：techniques 注意单词没有空格

原文：Considering the issue of cultural blending, I can think no better exemplification than the Silk Road, which is a timeless symbol of cross-cultural interaction. Crops such as grapes were introduced to China, enriching its agricultural landscape. Simultaneously, Chinese silks and papermaking tech niques were spread to the West, profoundly influencing civilizations among the route. Likewise, the Dunhuang murals, a magnificent combination of Indian religious art and traditional Chinese painting, stand as a vivid proof. Buddhism, after its arrival in China, was intergrated with Taoism and Confucianism, as evidenced by Wang Wei"s peaceful poems.

批改：论述文化融合的具体事例，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：In conclusion, cultural blending enriches globally. To promote it, we should embrace diverse cultures openly and act as cultivated communicators and implementers.

批改：总结全文，升华主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：19/20

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：第一段为传统的图画描述段，根据图画中的具体信息，尤其是下面的文字说明，进行直接描述。第二段可以以分论点的形式阐释图画寓意，文化的融合和交流问题，逻辑严谨，层次分明。最后一段表明作者本人对文化融合和交流这种现象的态度或看法，此评论部分可以提出建议，考虑背景及原因，或描述未来。

整体来看，作文理解了漫画内涵，段落框架明确，大体上与题目要求保持一致，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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