考研英语一2017年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语一写作冲刺每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2017年考研英语一批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a student, having many books but not reading them. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, there is a student, having few books but studying seriously. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that perseverance is the brush that paints a bright future, while sloth is the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, perseverance can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, in modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, perseverance has become a key quality that distinguishes exceptional individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident. On the other hand, sloth is not merely a chronic poison that stifles potential, but also the Achilles" heel of many youths. It silently erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of ascent into a self-destructive slide.

In brief, perseverance is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality; additionally, we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of sloth to ensure our growth stays on course. As the cartoon says, "Having books is not equal to reading books".

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：In the left-hand cartoon, there is a student, having many books but not reading them. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, there is a student, having few books but studying seriously. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that perseverance is the brush that paints a bright future, while sloth is the shackle that hinders progress.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, perseverance can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, in modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, perseverance has become a key quality that distinguishes exceptional individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident. On the other hand, sloth is not merely a chronic poison that stifles potential, but also the Achilles" heel of many youths. It silently erodes opportunities while warping the ladder of ascent into a self-destructive slide

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：In brief, perseverance is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality; additionally, we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of sloth to ensure our growth stays on course. As the cartoon says, "Having books is not equal to reading books".

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。

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