考研英语一2017年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon,there is a man,lying on the sofa,watching his book cabinet and saying,”i have so many books.”On the contrary,in the right-hand portrayal,the man makes a plan and says,”i try to read 20 books this year.”The cartoonist intends to convey to readers that taking action is the brush that paints a bright future,while saying without action is the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.On the one hand,taking action can ignite our creativity and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment,thus making life rewarding and meaningful,rather than being self-consuming.On the other hand,saying without action is like a heavy chain that hinders our progress,leaving us an negative outlook on life and preventing us from shinning brightly in future society.

In brief,taking action is the catalyst for social and personal development,we should actively support and promote this quality;additionally,we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of saying without action to ensure our growth stays on course.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：i

批改：首字母大写

原文：the

批改：改为 another

原文：i

批改：首字母大写

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，内容表达也很好

原文：an

批改：此处为 a

原文： shinning

批改：shining

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：,

批改：逗号不能连接两个完整的句子，此处改为句号

原文：we

批改：前面改为句号后，此处首字母大写

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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