2021年考研英语一大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2021年考研英语一大作文题目

考研英语一2021年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should1)describe the picture briefly, 2)interpret the implied meaning, and 3)give your comments. Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、2021年考研英语一大作文批改例文

The shown in the picture, there is a boy, wearing the Sun Wukong clothes and saying"Dad, many classmates think that learning opera is boring", while his father saying, "it"s enough that you like it". Evidently, the picture intends to convey to readers that it is sticking to one"s own ideas that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, sticking to one"s own ideas can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, blindly following others can harm relationships. erode trust and respect, and cause the loss of opportunities and resources. It can also damage personal image and reputation, leading to exclusion and failure in work and social situations.

In brief, sticking to one"s own ideas is the catalyst for societal and personal development. we will be the beneficiaries. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality. Only by doingsocan we develop individual potential.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The

批改：As

原文：saying

批改：改成谓语says

原文：The shown in the picture, there is a boy, wearing the Sun Wukong clothes and saying"Dad, many classmates think that learning opera is boring", while his father saying, "it"s enough that you like it". Evidently, the picture intends to convey to readers that it is sticking to one"s own ideas that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, sticking to one"s own ideas can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, blindly following others can harm relationships. erode trust and respect, and cause the loss of opportunities and resources. It can also damage personal image and reputation, leading to exclusion and failure in work and social situatio

批改：能够通过正反两方面进行论述来突出论点，能够运用逻辑关系词，使得句子之间衔接较为连贯。

原文：we

批改：首字母大写

原文：In brief, sticking to one"s own ideas is the catalyst for societal and personal development. we will be the beneficiaries. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality. Only by doingsocan we develop individual potential.

批改：该段再次总结强调写作的中心，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，注意谓语的正确使用。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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