2014年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of the Chinese cities population and countrysides population from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of the population of Chinese cities was 300 millions and this figure had gradually risen to 458 millions in 2000, to 666 millions in 2010. Meanwhile, the number of the population of the countrysides experienced a slow decline from 834 millions in 1990 to 807 millions in 2000 and then decreased to 674 millions in 2010.

Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry and it attracted many people from the countrysides to seek opportunities in the cities.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the development of China, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the flowing decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：change

批改：复数

原文：cities

批改：cities"

原文：countrysides

批改：countrysides"

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change of the Chinese cities population and countrysides population from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of the population of Chinese cities was 300 millions and this figure had gradually risen to 458 millions in 2000, to 666 millions in 2010. Meanwhile, the number of the population of the countrysides experienced a slow decline from 834 millions in 1990 to 807 millions in 2000 and then decreased to 674 millions in 2010.

批改：注意：数字+hundred，thousand，million和billion，用单数，不需要加s

原文：Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry and it attracted many people from the countrysides to seek opportunities in the cities.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，言简意赅

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the development of China, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the flowing decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，注意：数字+hundred，thousand，million和billion，用单数，不需要加s，名词单复数要使用正确；句式方面，句子结构连贯完整；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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