2021年考研英语一大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2021年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2021年考研英语一大作文题目

考研英语一2021年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should1)describe the picture briefly, 2)interpret the implied meaning, and 3)give your comments. Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、2021年考研英语一大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a boy, wearing the Chinese drama costume and saying that his classmates think learning Chinese drama is not fun, while his father encourages him to follow his heart and continue learning. Evidently,the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that sticking to oneself that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：that

批改：去掉

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there is a boy, wearing the Chinese drama costume and saying that his classmates think learning Chinese drama is not fun, while his father encourages him to follow his heart and continue learning. Evidently,the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that sticking to oneself that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7/20

全面的描绘出了图画中的内容，但是未能对图画内容背后的原因或意义展开论述，导致字数严重不足。语法方面，注意从句的正确使用。

修改建议：作文一定要满足字数的要求，论述要充分，否则会扣分。

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